Treasure stories

Treasure story
Carry and Bola were having sweets. Her mammy brought in a big bowl. They ate them too. ‘We are stuffed mum, do you have a drink like coke and a bar?’ they said. ‘You already had a big bowl of sweets’, Said Mum.
Carry said ‘I like them’. She asked Bola to go to the beach. He said ‘Yes’ and told her about the spiders under the bed. Bola said ‘I’m afraid of spiders.
But Carry looked under the bed and there was a big box. It was the treasure. They hid it. The police came. They took it and Carry and Bola missed all the treasure. They went home.
By Courtney(2nd class)

Treasure storyOne day Jasmine and Helina were going to a spa. Then Helina went to Amy’s house to play some games. Amy, Helina, Bethany and Jasmine were eating Jelly.
They had lots of fun.
Suddenly a blackbird flew through the window and gave them a map of treasure. Jasmine was jumping on Amy’s bed. Amy saw a box, she opened it. The box was full of gold and money. Amy couldn’t believe her eyes. They looked at the map. Jasmine put it under Amy’s bed. When Bethany was going down the stairs, she heard people calling her. They said ‘Open the door, we need the treasure.’ Bethany went upstairs and told her friend about the people. ‘What are we going to do’, she said. Helina and Amy fainted. Bethany went to see if the thieves were gone. So Amy’s mother answered the bell. Amy said ‘Noooo’. Amy went out the door and chased them away.
By Ogechi

Treasure story
Katy and Elisa were going on a trip. They were very excited. They were going on a ship to the beach. Katy said ‘I can’t wait until we get there.’ Elisa was scared to go on the boat. Then they were on the ship. They were in the same room. They were watching the the tv.
Katey and Elisa were on the beach, they stopped to make a sandcastle. They dug and dug. Then they hit something. It was a box full of gold. A thief called Kyle came. He was after the gold. Elisa said ‘I want to hide the treasure’, and thought they were safe. They were watching tv. It said that treasure was lost and people were killing for treasure. They heard that Elisa had the gold. People knocked on the door for the treasure. They were so scared. They jumped out the window. They forgot about the treasure.

By Daiana (2nd class)

Treasure story
One day Alana and Daiana decided to go
to a lovely hotel just for the summer.
They were looking forward to this all year.
They could not wait to go. They had to go to bed very early. Alana was changing her
bed, when suddenly she said to Daiana
‘Come over here now.’ There it was, a box.
They opened the box, it was treasure. It was filled with crowns, money and gold.
Then robbers knocked on the door and said ‘Come out now, we know you have our treasure.’ They panicked; they did not know what to do. Suddenly Alana had an idea. The only way out was the escape door. They climbed out it and the robbers got in. There was the treasure. They opened the box. There was nothing left in it at all. They looked all over but had to go back home and sleep.

By Katie Solan (2nd class)

Treasure story

One day Luke and Alex were in their hotel and went down to the swimming pool. When they got down to the pool, it was a funny day in the pool .They were playing beach ball in the pool. The hotel man gave them a map. When the man went out, they looked at the map. It was a treasure map. Luke, Dylan and Sam said ‘Let’s go!’ It led to their own hotel. The man got the treasure and the ring was The man said ‘In here’, and the ring was gone. So the man went back out to get the ring but all of the man’s treasure fell out of the bag but the man got the ring back for the people but they said that they wanted the gold ring and 200 euro off the man but the man said ‘no’. The police came. They said ‘Can we look around’ to Dylan and Sam but then the people came in and said nothing until they got to the door and tried to run. The police had them trapped. They could not say anything until their friend came. They said ‘It is not the police’. It was people looking for the treasure.

By Nathan Mc (2nd class)

Treasure story
One day Nathan, Chloe and Emma bought a new apartment. They had a party in the apartment that night .Then they went to bed. The next day they had their breakfast in the apartment. After that they watched tv. They were watching the Simpson’s. Then they had some sandwiches and coke. Then they had their dinner in the apartment and they went to bed. Next they went for a walk in the park. Suddenly they felt a bump under their bed. It was a map and they followed it. It led them out to the garden. They found a big treasure box with jewellery in it. Suddenly they watched the news. It said that treasur had gone missing from the shop. The garda were knocking at everyone’s door looking for it. The garda knocked at their door and looked under their bed. They gave back all the treasure to the garda. Then they went to bed.

By Elisa (2nd class)